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Open Poetry #13

The Comfort Zone

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

0 posted 2001-05-03 08:52 PM

Come,
I shall attend
to all of your needs
your wants,
& your desires

On this journey
I shall bridge for you
the gap between the real
& what is fantasy

I shall relax your mind
with the things that only
dreams are made of
Welcome into the arms
of love,
I am
for
You...

~Tier{R.T.}

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-03 08:55 PM

What a lovely invitation for someone. Joyce

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

2 posted 2001-05-03 09:06 PM

Thank you, Joyce, it's actually an old poem *sheepish grin* because my pen has run dry at the moment. Hopefully I'll get inspired again soon...

~Tier

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-05-09 08:01 PM

now this is a place where I want to be. . .

wow Tier. . . you really reach in and just take the feelings. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

4 posted 2001-05-09 10:32 PM

*blushes*

Thank you, Sven, so kind of you to say!

*smiles*

~Tier

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-05-10 12:45 PM

sounds very comforting.....nice poem!!

Nathan

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