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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-05-03 12:36 PM



Night Sounds
Virginia Salter

a whirring within
a wind without
something tapping
rapping
on the precipice of the unknown
claws scratching on woven metal
I sit inside
blinds drawn
draperies closed to the possibilities
waiting, listening
for that which lurks without
to pass away
or to intrude upon my solitude,
waiting. . .


©April  28,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
1 posted 2001-05-03 12:38 PM



Very eerie and well expressed, an awesome write once again from you...What a way with words you have!  

Take care,
Melissa~

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2001-05-03 01:15 AM


Oh, and I'm all alone here with my cat.  Joyce
Coal Surrender
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since 2001-04-01
Posts 84
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3 posted 2001-05-03 07:24 AM



Vas, haunting to say the least, shrill whispers inside the soul. Most enjoyable.

Coal

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