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Open Poetry #13

Dream With Me Forever

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2001-04-30 08:09 AM

Dream With Me Forever

Swim in the sunshine
Dancing by firelight
Dream with me forever
Remain heart’s in flight

Swing on the stars
Slide the rainbows
Dream with me forever
Wherever a heart flows

Stroll the meadows
Rolls in the clover
Dream with me forever
To love me sweet rover

A grassy riverbank
Waterfall cascading
Dream with me forever
In love song serenading

Moonlight and wine
Romance fill the air
Dream with me forever
Just call and I’ll be there

Hope

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-30 09:08 AM

this is lovely, "dream with me forever" what a cherished thought!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

2 posted 2001-04-30 09:46 AM

beautiful sentimants...
i dig the bit about seranading, myself...
good consistancy. it's a warm theme

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2001-04-30 10:27 PM

This is great Hope. I love it. Wonderful flow and what an idea...dreaming forever that would be nice..

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-05-01 12:40 PM

HopeS~
What pretty thoughts you've penned.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

5 posted 2001-05-01 12:52 PM

Thank you all for your kind words !!
Irish Rose, Ethan , Alan and Marge
Hope

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-05-01 07:21 PM

Hi Hope, this is such a nice thought, that someone will be there to dream with you forever. You wrote it beautifully.
Sandra

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