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Open Poetry #13
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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-04-29 04:22 PM

White Rain
By: Noah Eaton
4/28/01

Joined with her in true love
Balming me in ecstacy
With white rain, warm tears of the doves
Tears of angels shine happily

Balming me in ecstacy
Her fairy tale is timeless
Tears of angels shine happily
Flooding my body with kisses

Her fairy tale is timeless
Happily ever after
Flooding my body with kisses
Holding my angel forever

Happily ever after
With white rain, warm tears of the doves
Holding my angel forever
Joined with her in true love
© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-04-29 04:25 PM

This is lovely Mistletoe Angel.  I hope your life is always full of love.  Joyce
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-04-29 06:45 PM

sounds like love to me

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-04-29 08:22 PM

This is beautiful....I enjoyed it!

Nathan
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