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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

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Missouri

0 posted 2001-04-29 12:51 PM

Green leaves turned upwards
Maple tree prepares to drink
Raindrops soon coming

Dark 4 o'clock clouds
Western skies dark foreboding
Indiana summertime

The wind whirls the clouds
High in the threatening sky
Electrons collide

Summer rains refresh
Paint the earth a greener hue
Filling pools of blue

Amuse_mi
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since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

1 posted 2001-04-29 12:57 PM

"Dark 4 o'clock clouds
Western skies dark foreboding
Indiana summertime"

I love these moments before a storm. Tremendous imagery to me.

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-04-29 01:42 PM

such a thunderous storm, with the anticipation of raindrops...

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-04-29 01:49 PM

Wonderfully refreshing Songbird ... beautiful imagery!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-29 04:00 PM

Seems you sent the storm our way. I know that Spring rains are suppose to bring May flowers; however, ours have been beaten about with the rain and wind. Enjoyed reading.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2001-04-29 04:02 PM

Oh I was so sure you must live here in Washington. Lovely description. Joyce

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-04-29 04:03 PM

SongBird~
These are just lovely and alive with the
fresh imagery of Spring.
Beautifully done.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

7 posted 2001-04-29 04:54 PM

Glad these you enjoyed. These Haiku's are memories Of Hoosier Days Past

I finally got the Haiku bug perhaps.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-05-01 01:20 AM

Oooooh, I especially like that last stanza!!

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-05-01 07:38 PM

This is Indiana?? I thought for sure that it was Michigan. . .

Excellent Songbird. . .

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