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Ocean Breeze
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Ocean Breeze |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Upon the seagulls Wings lies the Ocean breeze, As silver moonlight Floats along the Tides endless shore I stand beneath the Stars and think of you To find peace *** "Within you I lose myself |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
GE~ PERFECT!! I know this......you said it perfectly......love this!  SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Just serenely lovely. You have a lovely softness about your writing that is a joy to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ForwardSearching Junior Member
since 2001-03-23
Posts 35 |
Beautiful and calming reflection, hope we all find that peace. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
The ocean to me has always been a source of peace and healing. I love this poem, Greeneyes. Thank you for this. Michael Proust- |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
This was very nice. I Love the Ocean too. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Your timing is excellent - this is the poem - I needed to read today - -AND like most of yours - It will go amoung my treasures |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
As silver moonlight Floats along the Tides endless shore I stand beneath the Stars and think of you To find peace ============================== so many times now...your words mirror my thoughts. such lovely imagery here GE...as always. heres to the stars... and touching peace. ~On The Sea~ by:Vertical Horizon from the cd: Live Stages No fog clear in the moonlight The stars shine so bright now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close Now I will reach for the stars Because Oh my love, that's where you are Chorus: Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea Waves crash break the silence Gulls cry a song of lament I walk on through the stormy night The air cries flash of anger Dark night enshrouds the stranger all alone without you Now I will reach for the stars Because Oh my love, that's where you are Chorus No fog clear in the moonlight The stars shine so bright now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touching my face Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close ... **Now I will reach for the stars Because Oh my love, that's where you are** oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
as how it should be. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yeah! You have portrayed a very nice "Happy Place". Melton |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A very beautiful piece that flowed very nicely.....fabulous write!!! Nathan |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA~ thank you, I am so glad you enjoyed and understood...now if I were at the beach... be wellMarge~ thank you for such a sweet compliment, I hope, if even for a moment, you were taken to a beach someplace remembering... be well my friend...ForwardSearching~ I so appreciate you stopping by to say hello....greetings and pardon my late welcome to this palace of poetry....be well... Michael~ for me as well...such a calm serenity to be found there, and with each time a different emotion...I thank you for stopping by...be well my friend.. KitKat~ thank you much... be well Bill  dear friend, you know what the beach means to me....I am always humbled by your words....be well always and hugs to you...JanetMarie~ mirrors could tell the story yes? and the song you have chosen to relay to me is beautiful....I know it well...thank you for always understanding my words and for be a supporter of passion...I do so appreciate it much always...hugs to you my friend....be well.... Sven~ yes indeed it should always be this peaceful....thank you my friend.... be well and hugs to you...2dalimit~ well thank you for telling me... and pardon my not welcoming you earlier to passions, you will find a great home here...be well... Nate Dogg~ thank you my friend...I really appreciate that....be well.... Be Well All~ Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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