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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2001-04-24 01:54 PM


I am listless
lost in thought
you are somewhere
where I ought
to learn to be
so brave and free
I am remorseless
weep in time
I live the thoughtless,
soughtless rhyme...
I am the half beat
measure's time
the beat
that's ever lost...
without the black line
measured cost...
I am the ever wish of "ought"...

And maybe never
and forever
a gentle whisper
of a rhyme...
maybe I am
forever tethered
to smoky eyes
and signs, divined?

Don't ask me to turn away,
when I could brush these tears, dismay--
Don't ask me to be silent when
I could hold your hand as friend...
I just can't turn and walk away...

I just can't leave you here this way.

I'll hold you when you need, my friend.
I told you. I am here. Defend,

you...

until...There is no end.


*repost from Open 11---for my lonely, gloomy rainy day*

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-04-24 02:14 PM


k/s,

friends would never choose to end?
but roads lead on, and bend

the introspection of a rainy day
oft leads me back along that way . . .

e/k

Krawdad
/:-}==
=#===

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 2001-04-24 02:16 PM


serenity-This was beautiful, and I am reminded where also I ought.
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-04-24 02:24 PM


Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
4 posted 2001-04-24 02:30 PM


So often these thoughts are so sad refrains, certainly we can all relate to experiences within our own lives. Good read.

"I am not now that which I have been."

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
5 posted 2001-04-24 02:34 PM


pretty durn cool for a repost hehe yuh
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-04-24 02:58 PM


I like everything about this; it has a haunting quality, can't put my finger on it, Gosh I sure love this laptop, I feel like Passions is right here!!!

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 04-24-2001).]

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