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when would the world love
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when would the world love |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
at nights when im alone I think of what would be of me when im gone would there be sadness? would there be happiness? is there a place so glamurous as heaven? or just a lonly feeling that's caused by death it self I wish and pray upon the stars to erase this lonely scars I've placed in me and you I can't redo my actions or even my love and passions I didnt make this world nor did all the cops so stop with all curroptions and I'll stop with my estortions stop with all rasism the skin is just the clouding that stays with in you holding I wish the lord to come to make us love as one whites with all the blacks browns with all the yellows the poor and the richest fellows to unite as jesus pride lord forgive us for our sin.....we are lust humans |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
juan- Very thought provoking and sensitive write, I have pondered these same thoughts. |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Welcome to Passions! |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I love it. Posted one very similar a couple of days ago called Seeing in black white. I teach diversity and frankly, will be dead by the time unity actually occurs. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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juanrodriguez Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 66ontario canada |
thanx every one for ur coments ......im gratful |
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