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Second Chance Sunset
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Second Chance Sunset |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 the way I see it, darlin’, we’ve been given a second chance at a beautiful sunset... foolishly, I almost put my camera away and ignored the splendor of the astonishing hues... don’t turn your back on this, my love... the clouds above have formed perfectly just for our viewing... unfortunately, I, too, turned my head yesterday and missed the gift of extraordinary color... look into my eyes, precious one... the stars above will, again, wait until we’ve indulged... hopefully, this time we will realize and make sure we take that ride of endless possibilities... lie back and relax, baby, we’ve been given a second chance at a beautiful sunset... for always, keep your eyes open and swim in the assurance of a million boundless sunrises. -kh 03/26/01 to be with you... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Snowpants you've done it again; I love your posts. Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ The title grabbed me and pulled me into such a lovely offering from your pen. Remarkably beautiful read, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* . . . I remember these. . . wonderful snowpants. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
the picture is perfect to keep your poem company. enjoyed the poem very much and the style you've used too. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah snowpants, you hooked me with the title and kept me hanging on til the very last syllable. This was a truly beautiful and inspired piece. Loved it!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
don’t turn your back on this, my love... the clouds above have formed perfectly just for our viewing... unfortunately, I, too, turned my head yesterday and missed the gift of extraordinary color... look into my eyes, precious one... the stars above will, again, wait until we’ve indulged... hopefully, this time we will realize and make sure we take that ride of endless possibilities... ============================== "the stars above will, again, wait until we’ve indulged" what a cool line that is SP ... love the imagery in this ... and the anologies. me thinks ya need to buy extra film  great write poetess groovy pants   *L*oh you speak to me in riddles |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Kathleen: thank you, my friend...you always make me smile with your replies! Marge: thank you so much for your wonderful compliment! I am glad you enjoyed this! Sven: thanks! I'm glad you could stop by! tradewind: well, thank you so much...I appreciate it! I am glad you liked it! TA: hey, m'friend...thank you much for your reply...it's great to see you stop by!! JM: oooh...I got a 'groovy!' I'm movin' up in the world!!  thanks, m'friend...and, yeah...I agree, definitely...extra film it is!! Wouldn't want to miss it THIS time!! Thanks so much, girlie!sp  to be with you... |
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