Open Poetry #13 |
Missing You |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
The autumn night is still and cold. The moon is hiding now and then Behind the clouds, but gleams like gold Each time that it returns again. I watch it and remember when We were together, you and I. Where have the years all gone since then? I miss you more as time goes by. In dreams your form I still enfold And like a lion in his den, I guard the secrets left untold And hidden from the eyes of men. They're buried in the deepest fen, Where waters weep and curlews cry. Not buyable for sou or sen. I miss you more as time goes by. I nestle like a winter wren, Where my golden memories lie And count the reasons, ten times ten, I miss you more as time goes by! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Betty this is so pretty. It needs to be sent back to the top. Love, joyce |
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Panne415 Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 104San Antonio |
Betty, This is terrific. I really enjoyed this. Panne |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce and Panne: Thanks both of you, for reading and commenting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
i don't think this one should be on the back pages, very lovely poem and beautiful wording |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Absolutely lovely.. Kate Blessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Tradewind and Katherine: Thank you both for your kind remarks. Betty Lou Hebert |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
Every season is a corner. Poem caught me. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
gotta love it!!! and that's honest!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this really is amazing SEA |
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