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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Tainted I turned you over in my thoughts, to bring my yesterday this morn. For moments keep time with my heart, as sunshine brings my new day born. In presence of you, tears have gone, dreamt I only, then of you. I'll lift a smile on lips to share, the cloudless skies, my thoughts in blue. Will ride the day out in the breeze, leaning back to soak it's warm. In heat through window, prism hued your come-on whisper, ghosts a form. In front of me, a gentle look, from tainted eyes that come to view, contaminated by eye touch and watch the movements, torment two. I thought of you as nighttime eased. A softness rested in a kiss of morning's dew and beams to touch that woke me to a new day's bliss. When yesterday's tomorrow came and made today "a thought of you" I gathered strength, to carry on as tainted eyes on mine, did view. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-26-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
absolutely a wonderful write!  SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent Wynter. . . the look again. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sea and Sven... I guess my title makes it seem negative but the eyes are tainted with the visions of "worth" not "faults" (if in love)...sometimes you can hope to get your meaning across and then other times...you just hope *s Thank you both..huggzzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This was a lovely and smooth read wynter...(yep, back-pedaling here, hope I didn't startle you ) and as to meaning..I think once we write it, it no longer belongs to us. (That's WHY I write in fact..grin..) But I also got the message of the danger of seeing ourselves through someone else's perceptions...if I'm wrong, don't tell me. I like the warning thought, there! HUGS. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well, I like it, period. Your explanation of thought made it the more enjoyable. Carry on Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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