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whiskey
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0 posted 2001-04-19 04:35 AM


Feelings I have deep down inside
I've kept them there away hide
In my mind, not to share
My eyes are closed, eyelids stare

Thoughts of you I have enclosed
Not to be thought about, forget implode
Enough pain taken by one heart
No tears I will cry apart

Lost a love I felt so true
Feelings are erased of you
Along goes my heart taken
Never to prey will it be opened
No person i'd trust, no-one i'd share
The inner thoughts, I have had to bare

Lost soul, gone wandering
No where to go , No where to belong
Nothing cared , all is gone
I must not give up I must go on
In myself ill believe, ill let my spirit fly


[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 04-19-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
gremlin
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since 2001-04-18
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1 posted 2001-04-19 04:51 AM


Good poem, really.

Stan

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
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2 posted 2001-04-19 05:50 AM


Great Piece, great ending...keep believing in yourself
~HUGS~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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