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Your Love
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Your Love |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Your Love I hold no expectations, in this existence it was not to be, but I will not sever your love. The keeper of your gift, guards it ceaselessly, recognizes rarity, mourns the loss of your love. Nexus of strength, silken thread of being, secreted pearl - your love. Saving this spark for when I need you most to recall the songs of your love. © 2001 Corinne Bailey |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Understood and appreciated every word! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
Your vocabulary shines in this one! Kay |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ohhh!! Cor Beauty from you is a constant thing in your writing.  I love this! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Corinne.....Uncommon eloquence. Bob |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Your work has a grace that is quite rare. This one certainly spoke to my heart this evening....thank you, Corinne. Kathleen Blake |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
JLR - thank you! Thanks, Kay! Temptress, thank you for your kind words! Bob - thank you, kind sir! Kathleen, thank you, Irish Lass! Corinne |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
As have many of yours - This will go among my treasures - I've pointed you out to those I call 'real' poets - Take pride in knowing they agree with me - you are one of them - - Even if I'm still learning |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Bill, thank you, thank you, thank you! I really do appreciate your encouragement - and - we're all still learning! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Wonderful ... absolutely wonderful. 'Nexus of strength, silken thread of being, secreted pearl - your love.' *Sighhhhh* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was awesome writing, Corinne!! All writing comes |
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