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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
My husband loves to post here All his poetic art Lately he's become a rear For which I played no part He can't bump up his work For which he is so proud He's acting like a jerk And hiding behind a shroud When I have time to read his latest And I think I'll boost it high He's already said he's the greatest Using my name to post reply What's it like being me? To think what I do when I read? To the punch he beat me Wayoutwalt, you little weed just so everyone will know, Walt's not in trouble at home. just busted  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm not clued in, but I'll watch for someone named Walt. What fun.!!! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
So busted! This absolutely cracked me up! I haven't read 'WOW' very often...I will have to start reading more, for both of your sakes. By the way, I loved your poem!! Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
(Elisa posing as Walt) Who Me? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I shouldn't deign to respond but when you cannot get your wife to read your poetry it is frustrating. I have told you a poem I get your response and I type it in but ok never again. I am glad this is all just in fun. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
In my own defense, when a man spends all his time writing poetry and leaves no time for domestic things (kids, dishes, etc.) the woman has no time to read a poem (or write one) because she is picking up his slack. (flinching) love you , Walt |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
oops. that was my reply above, obviously. darn cookies. they think I'm him |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Maybe you are both the same person and you just haven't figured it out yet! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you both for the much needed smile! I adore Walt's poetry, and elisa I would sure love to hear from you more! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elisaseyes~ Walt says you bake the best cookies ! And ... cookies are for sharing ! ! !  Great write ... whoever dun it ! ^^^^^^^^^^^ UP Ya' GO ! BeBumpALoola ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ya know, it's tough enough figuring out who's who in a place like this without you two playing hide-and-seek. Now cut that out!  Krawdad |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Thank you for your humorous responses. Walt didn't think it was as funny as I did. But he's been begging me for a long time to post another poem on her, so. . . .I did! I enjoy reading everyone's work (when I can). |
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