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RMW
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0 posted 2001-04-17 04:18 PM


Over Ruled

Summer softens.
And though the black and white
Of the birch out front
Object,
All else,
From the play of light in the woman's dress
To the disturbed flight of the nearby monarch,
Suggests
That in the courtyard garden
The bench rules
Otherwise.

RMW

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-17 04:21 PM


Bob...this goes in all directions, but directly into my library as a keeper!  Thank you for this!
RMW
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2 posted 2001-04-17 04:24 PM


Sunshine....Thank YOU. And, you are most welcome.  Bob
RMW
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3 posted 2001-04-17 04:26 PM


Sunshine...PS...As for all directions...kinda like a butterfly, huh? Chuckling.
Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-04-17 05:43 PM


Exactly what I saw....a whole rainbow of flutterbys....
Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-04-17 06:16 PM


From the play of light in the woman's dress
To the disturbed flight of the nearby monarch,
========================

wonderful imagery here poet sir ...
succinct and serene
very cool write

I love your imperfections ... I love your everything ...
Your broken heart ... your broken wings.

RMW
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6 posted 2001-04-17 06:56 PM


Thank you, Janet Marie.  Bob
Corinne
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7 posted 2001-04-17 07:38 PM


A great view of the world from your bench, Bob!

Cor

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