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ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

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0 posted 2001-04-17 03:33 PM

Some Other Day

I rise in the morning with the hope of a new day and shove the thoughts of you to the back of my mind and lock them away.
I know you have moved on and I am trying too but sometimes when I am with her, I start to think about you
God help me; let me push you from my mind
But your voice calls me over and over again and resisting is useless
Please for now just go away, let me sleep, don't bother my dreams
But please come back to me some other day

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-17 04:33 PM

Ummm, be careful what you wish for....

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

2 posted 2001-04-17 05:44 PM

Sunshine,

I know I should but no amount of wishing could change things. Thanks for reading. :-)

*Laura*

confetti
Junior Member

since 2001-04-12

Posts 33

3 posted 2001-04-17 05:46 PM

don't bother my dreams...good line

[This message has been edited by confetti (edited 04-17-2001).]

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-04-17 06:08 PM

Great write, Laura!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Writer
Junior Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 21
CA/USA

5 posted 2001-04-17 06:16 PM

I liked your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Writer
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 21
CA/USA

6 posted 2001-04-17 06:16 PM

I liked your poem. Thanks for sharing.

I can always be distracted by love, but eventually I get horney for my creativity.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-04-17 06:23 PM

wonderful Laura. . . but do you really want them back??

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-04-17 08:08 PM

Enjoyed reading the feelings within this poem...James

Kay
Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 70

9 posted 2001-04-17 08:52 PM

these feelings seem so familiar to me....

Kay
Let no one who loves be called unhappy. Even love unreturned has its rainbow." ~James M. Barrie~

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