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Open Poetry #13

Fog...Haiku...rearranged

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2001-04-17 01:31 PM

Enveloping fog
silently as on cat's paws
steals all if landward

(Hope you don't mind, interloper, but I couldn't resist this twist! Thanks for the idea!)

interloper's original:

"Fog steals silently
Landward as if on cat's paws
All enveloping"

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

[This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (edited 04-17-2001).]

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-04-17 01:36 PM

Good-o! Take it and play with it all you want.

Well Done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2001-04-17 02:26 PM

b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l...helen

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-04-17 02:51 PM

twisting fog delights
so twist the mist if you might
disappearing light

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