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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-04-14 09:08 PM



  


One thousand years
has come & gone
& Grissil knows all to well,
another thousand years can come,
his soul he will not sell.
Threw the danger the fighting the heartache the pain.
Grissil's love remains the same;  

Because Grissil no longer can forget.
The sights the smells the sounds he let.
Invade his soul & capture his brain.
To reach his heart where there to reign.
In majesty uplifting his life,
rekindling joy & the need to wife
the purest of pleasures past the hardest of strife;
within Grissil's surrounds a forging abounds,
to shed limitations & conquer higher ground.
So Grissil's feet may come to rest
when situations suit his very best.

Grissil rests then grits & bares all,
then strives , revolutionizing his own,
affecting others lives.
Only one tiny bird song
that twitters tune filled in his ear.
encourages his earth love,
promotes the coming tears.
                       


© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
Embers_Before_God
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1 posted 2001-04-15 01:41 AM


Nicely done...thanks...Embers
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2 posted 2001-04-15 02:06 AM


Very Cool! I love it!
helen smith
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3 posted 2001-04-15 04:46 AM


Craig  it is my new favourite
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