Serenade Affair...for Bill

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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-04-12 12:10 PM

~Serenade Affair~

You courted me in song tonight,
With caring eyes, of heart in flight.
Voiced in softness, mine to hear,
Your words, their presence, very near.

I pillowed them in cradle song,
Tucked them into night's belong.
A serenade affair of heart,
As twilight sinks, it's glow to part.

Advanced to me, a tenor sweet,
Pleasing mind into retreat.
Dreamswirls led me gently through
A wave of moonlit night, deep blue.

Stringed, fine-tuned, the noted rise
Inside my heart, with caring eyes,
Your words, seek presence, in shadow's stare
This night, a ~serenade affair~.

~Wynter * thanks

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 04-12-2001).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-04-12 05:41 PM

well I don't usually do this but it sure makes me wonder what is wrong with this poem....guess it has to wait for that certain Bill to respond...and here I thought it rather one of my nicer poems, uplifting...etc...I am not bumping...I am taking away my "nothing" because I am not going to be a "nothing" ever again.

Just Me

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-04-12 07:13 PM

There is not a thing wrong with this, it's a lovely poem.....Bill will love it

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-04-12 07:29 PM

Thank you Kathleen...sometimes a "nothing" does make you wonder...I went through and responded to others this evening, those not so well known and also those maybe a bit harder to understand...there is always something I can find in a poets heart to respond to. Thank you once again for being "you".

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-04-12 08:14 PM

Wynter - my name happens to be Bill. I would like to know if you wrote this poem for me? If not, it would be so nice to have you, or someone, write just one little poem for me. Yes, it would. This writing of yours is so senuous, telling, soft, and it must have been a treet for someone to sing to you. Especially the title, "Caring Eyes".

BC

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-04-12 08:33 PM

Hey you with the name that happens to be Bill....I wrote this for someone who sang sweetly in my ear the other night..soothing me before sleep...if only every night could be like that...

~Wynter/Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2001-04-12 08:36 PM

Wynter - H'mmmmmmm, I like the offer. Why not? I know how to sing a little. Are you in a situation or are you free, for a little music in your ear?

BC

nakdthoughts
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7 posted 2001-04-12 08:41 PM

well let freedom ring......I am always up for a song...to end an evening

Me (with a waiting ear)

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-04-12 09:09 PM

wynter - well, I usually don't do this, but I'm sending you my private unlisted phone number, and reverse the charges if you would. Please call, we really need to talk. Still love that poem.

BC

walker
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since 2001-02-11

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9 posted 2001-04-12 10:09 PM

Is it hot here or is it just me

Lovely poem, for a certain Bill!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

inot2B
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10 posted 2001-04-12 10:36 PM

Now how can a lady pass up an offer like Mr Charles's. Wynter we expect to hear tomorrow how good his singing is.

Dennis
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11 posted 2001-04-13 03:05 AM

ya know, friends used to call me Bill!!!!!

[This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 04-13-2001).]

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2001-04-13 06:16 AM

BC
You can always make me ~smile~, and anytime you want to croon to me you are wecome to.

walker
Oh maybe a bit warm..but I wouldn't say hot

inot2B
Well I thought I said how well his singing was in this poem..

maybe you need to reread. Thank you

A Bill named Dennis
**Wow another Bill, well then if youcan sing you may have been the one this poem was meant for *s

~Wynter ~thanking all of you~ especially Bill
for being able to cheer me up

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Marge Tindal

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13 posted 2001-04-13 07:25 AM

Wynter~
What a lovely, soft and sincere piece.
Thank you for sharing with Bill and with us.
*smiles*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Isabella
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since 2001-03-22

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Confusion

14 posted 2001-04-13 10:23 AM

I haven't been back for awhile, but I really enjoyed reading this one!
Lucky Bill!

inot2B
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15 posted 2001-04-13 10:34 AM

But you didn't tell us which Bill! Unless it was all of them Bills out there!

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2001-04-13 10:42 AM

Thank you Marge and Isabella,

and to inot2B...yes

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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