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Yesteryear
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Yesteryear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Yesteryear The windless winds of yesteryear Let phantoms to my resting ear. The sounds of rain, of times redone, The pain, the tears, the times of fun. They touch me like a second life. They move me like a second wife. They fill me full of hopes and fear, As much today as yesteryear. The windless wind left hosts of sounds, Of happy laughters ghostly rounds, Embrace me in a shawl of space. A spectral space and timeless place. A place where tolls a timeless bell Of places of love I used to dwell. Of candy sweet and bitter lies, Forever and it never dies. A windless wind of touchless awe, Eternity's forevermore. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So this was what rung my chimes last night....your windless winds of touchless awe.... I am so glad, then, that they woke me up so I could hear you float by.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The windless wind left hosts of sounds, Of happy laughters ghostly rounds, Embrace me in a shawl of space. A spectral space and timeless place. A place where tolls a timeless bell Of places of love I used to dwell. Of candy sweet and bitter lies, Forever and it never dies. I really like these verses, Seymour... such poignancy! Well done! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They touch me like a second life. They move me like a second wife. They fill me full of hopes and fear, As much today as yesteryear. The windless wind left hosts of sounds, Of happy laughters ghostly rounds, Embrace me in a shawl of space. A spectral space and timeless place. A place where tolls a timeless bell Of places of love I used to dwell. ========================== A windless wind of touchless awe, Eternity's forevermore. ============================ AHHHH I do so love when you ching me chimes and ring me bells with your winds of wisdom. Tis a breeze of rhythmic please. *ww*  me  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sy~ A phenomenal poem laced with both sadness and hope, perfect rhyme and flow!~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Did we have a good time? *L* Suthern, Poignancy, a five dollar word. THanks and *L* JM, Well as long as the breeze was srong enough to ching your chimes. Winkiewinkie Stinky Mellisa, Wonderful comment, thanks and *L* |
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