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Red Flaming Cold
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Red Flaming Cold |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Red Flaming Cold the road is deep as it is wide two may go down side by side clear paths can be earned yet some....are never learned what makes a word the truth evidence showing off the proof necessary bread turns to dust a silver lining fades and rust the conjuring magic of time slips and slides between hell and devine taken in choices that we make turned with only one promise break shown again in the result a red flaming cold insult |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Helen~ ............wow.......... |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
"a red flaming cold insult" You HIT it again with a great last line. This is a tough poem, Lady. You do know how to write 'em. S Arthur |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"slips and slides between hell and devine" h, I'll echo SEA . . . WOW wow e /:-}== |
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painted lady Junior Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 48on the wing or nectaring |
1s_l, This reads like experience talking ... I hope that experience is in your past. Vivid poetry! pl And then my heart with pleasure fills, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Choices that we make. That is what makes up our life. Good poetry. Joyce |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
love the title and the rest is fantastic, Helen...you look beautiful by the waves! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
helen....I do understand the anger of this..."red flaming cold..." someday? I will tell you the story behind my understanding..but until then? I hope only to sleep. "red flaming cold" stunning image! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
love this image helen. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
SEA....TY for the WOW....i do like your wow's....helen S Arthur Grey.....what can i say? i write 'em as i see 'em....thanks....helen e....echo....echo....echo....ty...ty...ty...h PL....some live life hardly....some live life hard....helen Joyce...ty....so glad you liked....helen Kathleen....you are part of my soul....i am but part of yours....do you know how you touch me?....helen Serenity....glad you liked....red flaming cold is just how i felt....it is the only way to describe it...helen Sven....thanks...as always....helen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Thank you once again for the lovely words and the e-mail, please feel free to write me anytime! I love hearing from you. Kathleen Blake |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your poem...James |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Wonderful Imagery! Touching writing. "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - uh huh, you sure write them with feeling and grace. Enjoy reading your writings. BC |
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