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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-04-10 10:51 PM


Night/Day Senryu

lacy shadows dance
moonbeams lifting in delight
kiss me in the night

sun beams stream through blinds
anticipation
in your waking eyes

mine meet yours smiling
sharing kisses of delight
real dreams meet sunlight


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1 posted 2001-04-10 10:52 PM



These are phenomenal!  I love 'em, especially the second senryu  

Take care,
Melissa~

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2 posted 2001-04-10 11:00 PM




Pillows tightly held
Substitute for absent love
Squeezing pillows, too

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you know I just love these! Beautiful!!    SEA
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4 posted 2001-04-10 11:13 PM


Thank you all...poetic answers in kind are most wonderful!
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5 posted 2001-04-11 12:24 PM


Hazel eyes gazing
share morning intimacy
renewing fervor

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-11-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-04-14 10:44 PM


Night dreams of you come
making shadows dance for me
lighted by your eyes

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7 posted 2001-04-14 10:46 PM


These are beautiful dreams.
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