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Embracing Enticement
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Embracing Enticement |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 I just could not squeeze inspiration from this world in which I exist... so, I walked to the edge of my knowledge and entered the land behind your eyes... much to my surprise, I found rivers, whispering my name in currents of adoration... everywhere I turned, I came across endless meadows, singing of your love for the soul within me... as I walked past the defending mountains, bottomless valleys of captivation came into view... timeless winds of devotion passed softly by, leaving the sweet scent of our kisses in its path... while witnessing the setting of the sun, I took in and memorized each striking color... walking back to the edge of my knowledge, I realized the inspiration to make my home behind your eyes. -kh 04/10/01 to be with you... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very nice, extremely nice. Though I can't help but wonder what kind of world you live in that provides no inspiration. This is truly sad. I'm so happy you found a way, a place from where you may be inspired. |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Wow, this is beautiful. Drenched with glorious imagery. Thanks so much for sharing this treasure  ~Becky~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes the beautiful parts of this life seem most vivid when shared with another...James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I found rivers, whispering my name in currents of adoration... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wonderful, beautiful, inspired. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one takes my breath away, sp. Your imagery is superb. All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I embraced every word of this! Kathleen Blake |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I embraced every word of this! Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I just could not squeeze inspiration from this world in which I exist... so, I walked to the edge of my knowledge and entered the land behind your eyes... ========================== while witnessing the setting of the sun, I took in and memorized each striking color... walking back to the edge of my knowledge, I realized the inspiration to make my home behind your eyes. =========================== very very cool write SP ... great use of metaphor and imagery to define the discovery and devotion of the inspire. well done poetess..... (and by the way..) read cowboy the latest round of blah blah and he wanted to retaliate...but I made him behave.. actually...I refused to type it LOL I love having the power ROFL.. told him to save his words for poetry and give me something to post for him.  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
perfect! I love this SEA |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
snowpants, Not only beautiful imagery, imagination, but very well written. This is writing at its best. Thank you for this. Michael Proust- |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very, very good. Joyce |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
A lovely portrait of two lovers becoming one. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
VAS: actually, this is anything but sad, VAS...my world is not bad, uninspiring, yes, but not horrible...it's just that my eyes have been opened to a whole new world...some things I've never even imagined before! But, I am glad you liked this, and thank you for reading! Becky: why thank you so very much...I am glad you enjoyed this... JamesMichael: yes, most definitely...life is so much richer sharing it with someone you love! thank you!  Interloper: inspired...oh yeah! thank you so much...I'm glad you liked this! LW: took your breath away?? that is a very wonderful comment! and thanks for the compliment on my imagery! it means a lot to me! glad you could stop by! Kathleen: thank you, m'friend...glad to see you here and I'm happy you liked this! JM: hey you...thank you so much for your compliments! and, yeah...I'll bet cowboy just didn't have a comeback...LOL...yeah...he should save his words for poetry, since that's his strong point...as for baseball...ahem...we won't go there again...  ...thanks, JM!!  SEA: perfect? wow...thanks so much! glad you liked it! Michael: your compliment means so much to me, especially the imagery part...you are too kind, m'friend! thank you so much! Joyce: thank you very much! glad you liked it! thecraig: thanks so much! I am happy to see you liked this! walker: thanks for stopping by, m'friend! sp  to be with you... |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
SNOWPANTS! Where have you been? Is it just me, or have you not been around as much? Miss your work anyways. I ADORE this. Its beautiful! still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in our search for inspiration. . . sometimes, we forget that it can be right in front of us. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Temptress: hey...no, actually, I haven't been around as much...at least, not like I used to. But, thank you for the pick-me-up! I'm glad you liked this! Sven: yes, you are absolutely right...thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed! sp to be with you... |
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