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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-04-10 06:11 PM


As the day closes it's door
With the approaching of the night
I find myself alone with you
In front of the firelight

Staring at the embers
Basking in the glorious heat
I feel your warm, manly hands
As they begin to caress my feet

How I love being close to you
How I yearn for your touch
May I move closer to you?
Would that be asking too much?

I feel your hand as it travels
Along my thighs, up to my hips
As I imagine the sensual softness
Of your gorgeous, sweet lips

The aroma of jasmine
Completes the sensual mood
Red wine and our love
There's no need for real food

We dine on our love
It's a three course affair
No need is there for anyone else
But us to be there

For entree I will choose
A generous helping of your lips
As I'll request for your hands
To rest upon my swaying hips

Main course will be a treat
For our bodies will finally meet
As our passion starts to burn
And our bodies begin to yearn

So much electricity is in the air
As I catch sight of your wanting stare
Our hearts now beating so fast
How long will our passion last?

Are we ready for dessert?
Will this make our meal complete?
As I move on top of you
And finally our bodies, they greet

Your hands on my shoulders
Warm breath on my skin
No longer am I able to control
My cheeky, wicked grin

You whisper sweet nothings
As we two become one
So soon our sweet loving
Will be over and done

How satisfying was this meal
But there's something I need to know
If I tip the waiter handsomely
May I have another three courses to go?

Suetang

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1 posted 2001-04-10 07:02 PM


Hmmmmmmm,  time for a cold shower. Cute ending!
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2 posted 2001-04-12 12:32 PM


I like this menu! LOL.
Suetang
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3 posted 2001-04-12 09:01 PM


I guess it's dangerous to write so close to dinner time??

Suetang

Panne447
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4 posted 2001-04-13 06:16 PM


Sue
Thank goodness I do most of mine at night...after dinner... This was a super read and loved the ending. Panne

Suetang
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5 posted 2001-04-13 07:15 PM


Hello Panne
Thank you for your kind comment.  I just hope people don't get the wrong idea of me from this piece.  I guess I just have a good imagination.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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6 posted 2001-04-14 06:01 PM


Sue,

As you know, I liked this one a lot.  You've a good imagination.  

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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