Senryu couplet - Dammed desire

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Senryu couplet - Dammed desire

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-04-10 04:55 PM

admiring eyes gaze
watching soft silken slip slide
molten desire dammed

forbidden vistas
revealed by silken rustle
desire dammed no more

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 04-10-2001).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-04-10 05:01 PM

Consider yourself thus....wow'd....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-04-10 07:35 PM

ummmmmmmmmmmmm

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-10 08:03 PM

Wow . . . impressive!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-04-11 06:55 PM

Nothing like breaking through a "forbidden vista".
Love this.
Sandra

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-04-11 08:07 PM

yes!!

this is just too good. . .

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Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

6 posted 2001-04-11 08:49 PM

Very niiice...

slides over the psyche like a silken scarf pulled softly across tender skin...

-Tier

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