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wandering
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0 posted 2001-04-10 09:45 AM


You gently touch my soul
With everlasting adoration
In return
I hand you my heart
Mold it as you will

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer

© Copyright 2001 Ron Fox - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-10 09:56 AM


gently.....( this is so beautiful )
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-04-10 10:14 AM


listen ... I just heard a heart whisper.
yes...indeed, beautiful in its poetic succinctity.

... you better kiss me ... cause you're gonna miss me ... when I'm gone ...

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3 posted 2001-04-10 01:00 PM


perfect. . . to give the heart. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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