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Tender Touches....( Rictameter)
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Tender Touches....( Rictameter) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Needing Tender touches To warm me in the night Fantasies of romance made real Through heat of hands and blending of two hearts Coming together to create A night of dreams come true Wishes granted And sighs ~SEA~ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
So beautiful SEA!  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . this is. . . just. . . well. . . wow. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You better watch out ... you are getting very warm, not to mention ... Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
SEA....nice poem but not a rictameter according to the definition I have. I believe the last word must be the same as the first word.... Rictameter is a scheme similar to cinquains. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2,4,6,8,10 Then down again, 8,6,4,2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with. Mike "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully romantic! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Brad~ thank you Sven~ thanks Interloper  Mike~ Thank you so much, after I read yours, I kinda figured that I didn't do this one right I really like learning new forms of poetry, so thank you very much for telling me how it is supposed to be....I have no idea until someone tells me All of these styles are new to me...I learn as they get posted....some look too hard, but I'll get them eventually, again, thank you for telling me ~SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Walker, you snuck in there...thank you SEA |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
SEA....you write very well and I have no doubt that you can master any form presented here. Since I've been visiting PIP I have learned so much thanks to many here, including you. (You introduced me to cinquains.) With the little I know, I'm glad I could be of help to you. Mike |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
That's so sweet of you Mike... Thank you SEA |
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