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Packratmike
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0 posted 2001-04-09 06:54 PM


flowers
wildly grow
across boundless fields
with ferocious frantic colors
exploding 'neath blinding sunlight
Nature's palette burns unforgivingly
into the artist's maddened mind
who only wanted to paint the
delicate aromas
of heavenly
flowers


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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2001-04-09 06:56 PM


Beautifully done! I'm going to have to try this style everyone is doing!  
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2 posted 2001-04-09 07:00 PM


Mike~ I like these Rictameters....very neat style...I loved this one! Very vivid!    SEA
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3 posted 2001-04-09 09:32 PM



Mike, this is perfect and so vividly expressed! You've mastered this technique well  

Take care,
Melissa~

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4 posted 2001-04-09 09:45 PM


This is a hard style to get the hang of, but you've done a very nice job.. I love the images this piece portrays.  Very nice job.

--Marie

"Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul."  --Emily Dickinson

Packratmike
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5 posted 2001-04-09 09:49 PM


Brad, SEA , Melissa & F/A...thank you all. I love the different styles.  They are puzzle-like and sometimes the endings surprise you.

Mike

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6 posted 2001-04-09 10:06 PM


Very nice writing, Mike.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Packratmike
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7 posted 2001-04-09 10:29 PM


Thank you LW.
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