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Open Poetry #13

My first and last Love

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

0 posted 2001-04-09 04:30 PM

Thanx to Helen Smith for help to write this....Thanx
I lie in my lonely bed, idle hands not idle
Hands that reach for her ... reach for her    shadow
A new world was waiting for me...
The cool air, the moon, the stars........
The dreams, the happiness, the sorrows…
My heart was ready
My hands knew the song.
   Her shadow on my walls…knew the dance.
She moved inside me and travel up to my heart
Soon the moon and the star would shine their approval
And she would join her shadow and me
In our eternal Dance
Soon
She stole my heart and went away
Making me her slave
For the whole life...
She locked my door and took the key
But I would never leave
And here I wait upon my bed
She will come one day
And will make me happy up to my desires
Until then I am a dancer with …the shadows

~Waseem~

I love to nice poetry.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-04-09 04:36 PM

wow...touching the heart here...fantastic write!!

SEA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2001-04-09 04:38 PM

I can feel this one...James

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2001-04-09 04:54 PM

Touching! Great job

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-09 04:58 PM

Dancing with shadows, we so often do, but with spring about the corner...perhaps shadows no more.

"I am not now that which I have been."

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-04-09 05:04 PM

Your heart really comes through in this. I could feel your happiness and then your sorrow. Good write!

Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-04-09 05:42 PM

Well done!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

7 posted 2001-04-13 12:33 PM

oh waseem it ended up lovely.........when will you make her your wife ?

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

8 posted 2001-07-02 09:48 PM

stilll so nice

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