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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2001-04-09 01:43 PM


Are who we deem to be,
Who we reflect to others,
Look at the reflections in the mirror,
Are we a reflections bouncing back,
An illusion of many mirrors,
A diamond in the rough,
A retrospective of what is to be,
or not,
Do people know us by our face,
Or just the reflection of shadow,
Do we speak of heart, body, and soul,
Just a aspect to respect,
Always be yourself,
Though it's one of the hardest things to do.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 04-09-2001).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2001-04-09 01:49 PM


I love the poem but I have to ask Did you mean reflection. If not then nevermind. Great poem  
bslicker
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2 posted 2001-04-09 01:49 PM


Always will be myself, but the reminder never hurts every once in a while..
Great words...
Bernie
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Bernie Slicker

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3 posted 2001-04-09 02:08 PM


Yes, and be true to yourself.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2001-04-09 09:02 PM


thanks Brad, as a matter of fact your absolutely right I was thinking about it or reflecting on it as I was driving and realized I spelled it wrong, so thank you,
thanks Bernie, your very kind
Interloper, your so right to be yourself
is the best thing, it also helps your attitude. In a positive way!

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