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A Couple Of Things....(one "Thank You" for a friend)
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A Couple Of Things....(one "Thank You" for a friend) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Whisper wind The night to me, Sing song Flutter breeze. Roam wind The churn of sea Whisper crest Waves crash free. Bring wind The settled ease Love knows He finds in me ********************************************** This night the heart is settled, And I will await the morning, With hope dreaming constant clarity. And if the storms come by night tomorrow, I will answer to voices of life. Come touch with me the miles of stars, And watch another dark fade away. Then see with me the moon, How the clouds protect it so, And then let me think on that, For although there be clouds within me now, I give them their own respect, For in their journey they protect my heart. For in a fragile state we must also be strong, And in a fragile state while trying to be strong, There should always be someone there to protect us. And so I gain a new respect for melancholic mood, For it protects while the stitches are sewn. And I, for love, still shout, And for a friend, still remain as the brightest ember in that respect. And shall he hear me now above the wind? Speak, sir If you hear me, then speak, As I know you will, And as you know what I mean to say. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hope he hears you and takes the friendship too, as sometimes this is even better. Pssst....I think you forgot to delete a line? (or maybe I read it wrong, stranger things have happened) these seem duplicated but what do I know.... For in their journey they protect my heart. For in a fragile state we must also be strong, And in a fragile state while trying to be strong, Lovely plea Temptress, I really enjoyed this. |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
This talk on protection.romantic words giving your fradgile self to another. I wonder if you need find your strong points, you may learn that weakness may be selfcovered, & love has little to do with bodyguards. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . and I hope that your "Thank you" is met with a "You're welcome". . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
He always hears and always answers. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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Nicolette Fox Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 10Michigan |
Wow. I found that second section really profound and moving. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was a nice thank you to your friend. I hope he heard it and that your friendship continues. Nice write. All writing comes |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Hopefully, your thank you was heard. These are excellent. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is so sincere.... Kathleen Blake |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very beautiful, and the same thoughts I feel for a certain person. Peace Sandra |
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