Open Poetry #13 |
looking. . . looking back. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the full moon shines and, in its glow, I see your face looking. . . with love and I wonder if, being there, you see my face looking back. . . with love --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The moon reflects both the truths and mysteries of love, doesn't it? Enchanting thoughts, Sven. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Such a sweet, romantic notion. Enjoyed. Speak when you are angry--and you'll make the best speech you'll ever regret...Laurence J. Peter |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ah...another moon beam! Thank you...was a glorious weekend for reflection! and with a giggle...your title reminded me of an old song! "Looking back on the track for a little green bag! Got to find just that kind or I'm losing my mind! Outta sight in the night outta sight in the day, looking back on the track for a little little green bag!" Name that tune AND the artist! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire, yes it does. . . and I'm thankful for it. . . thank you. . . JLR, thank you for reading. . . serenity, glad that I could help you reflect. . . and I'm sorry. . . but I have no idea on who or what your song is!! ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sweet Sven. I would say this is a simply tender poem, and that I would hope that she is looking back. still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
How romantic..that mysterious moon of light and love. Wonderful, Sven. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
a very romantic write.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh I wonder this, too. Do they think of us with the same memories? Perfect "moon" poem. Sandra |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
sven, so tender and lovely |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress, thank you. . . Angel, thank you my friend. . . indeed it is quite mysterious. . . Greeneyes, glad that you enjoyed. . . Sandra, I'm sure that they do. . . wonderful to see you back. . . Chelsea, thank you for reading. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sven,my friend,I just love reading your poetry.Iam glad to be your friend enjoyed it a lot |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The title fit the poem and the poem graced the title... well done! |
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