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K2001
Junior Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 31
Near manchester in England

0 posted 2001-07-28 02:06 PM


I see a small child, alone in the darkness.
Curled in a ball, lost in lifes mess.
Slowly...she pulls her legs nearer...
trying to escape the pain inside her.
Shes so alone, shes scared to cry.
Just incase the ask her why.
How could she ever begin to explain?
The truth behind this secret pain.
She cannot understand the fear she feels.
Nor comprehend the child he steals.
She rocks silentley, a tear in her eye......
In the darkness i watch her die.

"Keep the faith"-Jon Bon Jovi

© Copyright 2001 K.J.Hilton - All Rights Reserved
Hellseyes
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
1 posted 2001-07-28 03:40 PM


this is da shkit../Drew/
LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

2 posted 2001-07-29 03:17 AM


Wow!  what a dark poem.  that was a good one.  good job

ladypeach1

Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
3 posted 2001-07-29 04:39 PM


I loved this... I do not cry in front of anyone because if I do they will ask why. Even if I begin to tell them my words wouldn't be enough to express my pain... Great write!! I related to this sooo much...  

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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