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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2001-01-19 04:36 PM

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2001-01-19 04:50 PM

love it and the black background and choice of fonts....enjoyed very much

very attractive...nicely done

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

2 posted 2001-01-20 01:41 AM

I simply love the darkness in this one... Very well written.

cheers.

Zyell
Member

since 2000-07-28

Posts 121
USA

3 posted 2001-01-20 10:54 AM

oooooooooo0000000 i love this,
and the black and white, perfect! Enjoyed
this deliciously dark piece very much!

hoping to read more of you!

*S*

Z

Life is an adventure
to be experienced

Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

4 posted 2001-01-20 12:04 PM

A great display, I love it.
Joel
HHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLLLL

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

5 posted 2001-01-20 07:15 PM

This was wondrfully dark and interesting, loved the black too!!

-Gin

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

6 posted 2001-01-21 12:58 PM

thanks so much for taking the time to read ... i am just beginning to explore the darker sides of my poetry and find it an interesting venture ... what is making it fun, is that i sometimes don't have any idea where a piece will end and the subject matter to overwhelmingly rich with imagery ... thanks again.

Swamp¤Faeryie
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

7 posted 2001-01-21 05:01 PM

geez louise do you always write like this? i don't think i've read one of yours yet that i didn't like,this one is wonderful wonderful,kind of reminds me of baudelaire,as far as profoundness and intensity goes. really liked it!!!!!!

swamp

Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman

Isis
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

8 posted 2001-01-21 07:02 PM

Gothic work at it's finest, both visually and poetically. Bravo my friend!!!
Isis

*The heart of education is the education of the heart...*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

9 posted 2001-01-22 07:32 AM

Swamp¤Faeryie and Isis ... thank you for reading and your comments ... Baudelaire's influence is difficult to escape and the style of this and several other dark pieces i've written are loosely modeled and inspired by his work ... he was a master of bringing the reader into the dark without the reader realizing it and before one knows it, one is enticed and captured by the allure ... thanks again.

dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

10 posted 2001-01-22 04:15 PM

Very attractive in appearance and a super read. Enjoyed it very much.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

11 posted 2001-01-23 01:03 PM

Wow very nice here. Everything was great. Wonderful job on this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

12 posted 2001-01-30 11:04 AM

A truly dark piece!
Keeps the reader's attention
for sure.
*thanx*

mYsTiC

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

13 posted 2001-01-30 01:06 PM

This stuff just absolutely rocks...I still go the the preface to a Stephen King novel, or maybe even the intro into a Wes Craven film. This is classic, dark, gothic material that intriguingly scares the hell out of me. Awesome.

Jerm

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

14 posted 2001-02-01 09:51 PM

thanks again to all above for reading and commenting, but let's not start confusing anything i've written with Steven King or Wes Craven (i sure enjoyed the compliment though) ... thanks again ... i mean that most sincerely.

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