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Dark Poetry #3

grown,grow, and go

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

0 posted 2001-07-18 05:47 PM

we are grown, grow, and go. melt away
like heated snow return to the river
          in one solo flow
    for when we die it's not a forever
           just a natural indever

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

ChibiDeathscythe
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 128

1 posted 2001-07-19 06:05 PM

This was _very_ good. I like "solo flow" :}

"Suicides have already betrayed the body.
Still born, they don't always die,
bu dazzled, they can't forget a drug so sweet
that even children would

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-07-20 11:05 AM

"for when we die it's not a forever
just a natural indever"
How very true! The comparison between snow melting away and death was a great idea.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

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