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Dark Poetry #3

My Love Dreams I

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-07-01 02:00 PM

Mine is a dark choir that sings to the stars
Its voice caressing and inflicting the scars
Of a thousand songs of wishful love
And it will never change its tune

Love is the hammer that beats on my heart
Its claw is pulling and ripping apart
The fancies I so desperately dream
And it can never stop too soon

Dreams are the poison to slake my thirst
Their lies and promises taste the worst
But nothing else is truly mine
And from these dreams, my life is hewn

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

1 posted 2001-07-04 04:05 PM

It's a good one ... well expressed and hope to see more of it

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

Fallen Angel of Darkness
Junior Member

since 2001-01-17

Posts 26
Among the Shadows

2 posted 2001-07-09 10:56 AM

Wow. Sleep can often be an escape or a hell. I hope your night hours improve for you. Very well done piece. :-)

~* Megs *~

I love the lines some men use to get us into bed. "Please, I'll only put it in for a minute." What am I, a microwave?
— Beverly Mickins

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-07-06 04:03 AM

looking for some fresh stuff that could be buried, and wondering where you are. I love this.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

4 posted 2002-07-06 06:06 AM

enjoyed it
as old as Eyrie
or the dark pond of Mona

arthur

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