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Phreak
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since 2001-04-11
Posts 26


0 posted 2001-07-01 11:14 AM


Before I even meet you, love
I will dream about you every day
I will pray that loneliness forgets you
And that you are kept out of harm’s way

I am preparing for our journey
Strengthening my soul, my mind, my heart
So that you can have the best me…
All of me, not just broken parts.

I promise that I will hold you close
When your demons want to dance
I will protect you from your fears
And replace them with romance.

When memories begin to haunt
And you start to feel the pain
I will kiss your hurt with my love
Together, we will chase away the rain

Each day our love will grow stronger
The world won’t tear us apart
Nothing will be impossible
As we synchronize our hearts

Until the day fate brings us together
Just know that you’re already loved
It’s only a matter of time, my dear
Perfect timing He has up above.

"I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright" (3EB)

© Copyright 2001 Phreak - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2001-07-01 11:37 AM


How this incredibly deep and spirit filled poem has touched my heart~  I have yet to meet my soul mate and I pray for him, just as you do....You are so right, God's timing is perfect and in His time we will both be blessed beyond our wildest dreams..I suggest that you repost this exquiste poem in the Spiritual Forum, there, it would be so very much apprecited! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Phreak
Junior Member
since 2001-04-11
Posts 26

2 posted 2001-07-01 11:45 AM


I was thinking of posting this somewhere else, but I figured even Dark Passions could use a little light from time to time...

Unless of course a Moderator feels that this particular poem is not dark enough for the forum and moves it...  (I am being facetious here, in case you haven't picked up on it   )

  

[This message has been edited by Phreak (edited 07-01-2001).]

Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
3 posted 2001-07-01 12:07 PM


This was sooooooooooo beautiful.  I am having one of them *really* bad days and this poem sent shivers down my spine.  It is wonderful to know that these sort of feelings still do take place in the heart, mind and soul.

Thanx for the lift,
Mags

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
4 posted 2001-07-02 03:14 AM


I conjured up my dreaming love long before I met her. When you meet your 'soul-mate' I hope that you are hers.
Keep praying,
Ian

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 2001-07-02 05:09 AM


reminds me slightly of a song by Lonestar... very nice sentiments, hope you find that person, wherever they may be.

I've gotta find you
Don't care how long it takes
I know when I do it'll be worth the wait
With God as my witness and love as my guiding star
Maybe Miami on some sandy beach
New York City making waves on wall street
No matter where you are
I've gotta find you

     -Lonestar

C

Phreak
Junior Member
since 2001-04-11
Posts 26

6 posted 2001-07-02 06:25 AM


Thanks for the kind words, Ian,..., I just hope that when I do meet my soulmate it will be a 'him' before I get so frustrated and actually start looking for a 'her' (haha)

(Phreak is a female :0 )

Chris: Lonestar rocks.  Thanks for the words amongst other things.  

"I woke you up and I slit the throat of your confidence, and we laughed in the night and I felt alright" (3EB)

Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197
Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A.
7 posted 2001-07-02 09:08 AM


OOPS!
My bad.

Sing while you may
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Qa'sepel

Fallen Angel of Darkness
Junior Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 26
Among the Shadows
8 posted 2001-07-02 01:25 PM


Awww...such a beautiful piece!  I love it! Great job.  

Until the day fate brings us together
Just know that you’re already loved
It’s only a matter of time, my dear
Perfect timing He has up above.

Such hope inspiring words!  

~* Megs *~

"It's only after we lost everything that we are free to do anything. " -- Tyler Durton, Fight Club

LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

9 posted 2001-07-07 12:20 PM


What a beautiful poem! So wonderfully written.  Beautiful, just simply beautiful!
You have a great talent, keep up the good work.

LadyPeach1

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
10 posted 2001-07-09 05:54 PM


I think that it is good to prepare yourself...some have the attitude just take me as I am...with no thoughts of consideration for how you affect those around you...James
Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
11 posted 2001-07-09 06:40 PM


What an exquisite piece of writing, I was captured by each and every word.  Long may love reign!!  Take care......Sue

Suetang

illusion
Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296

12 posted 2001-07-10 11:54 AM


This is very beautiful. He's a lucky man to have you praying - even if he doesn't know yet how lucky he is.  
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