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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
All uncertainty, and disorder cease. All life is stable Everyone is at peace. But does this REALLY make our lives complete? "Life's for a-livin', not for a-wastin'." |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Hmmmm makes ya wonder eh? Personally, I dont think our lives are ever complete. In time we grow, mature and meet so many new people. No matter how peaceful my life may seem, I always hope for more. (Okay so I am gready lol) Good thoughts though, Mags Don't fear your tears! |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
dark kisses- thanks for takin time out to read my poem. i also feel that once we think we have everything, theres always something else missing. then again,is having everything really worth it? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Hmm.. the questions you pose here really made me think. I like this. It got my mind reeling... Nice work. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite deep...i enjoyed this poem greatly...making me think  ...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Fading Away- so nice ta hear from ya again its also nice that you took time out to read this other poem of mine. the point of the poem is to ask "What's life without a little excitement?" Well, thanx for readin''!Anonymous albert- nice to hear from you too, AA. Its good you enjoyed my poem, and it made you think about it for a sec. thanx again! |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
this is intriguing! i really like your short-but-sweet format. i think often times, shorter poems can be the most powerful. i guess that's the basis behind that whole "haiku" thing i've been hearing about Anyway, very nice poem here, though i would prefer italics to caps lock. Keep posting! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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