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Rebelious
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since 2001-05-27
Posts 57
Kansas, USA

0 posted 2001-06-26 09:11 PM



Love is horrid, Love is bad.
Love is delightful, Love is great.
But for me its all the above.
You see I thought I found the perfect mate.

My love for her still remains.
That is the bad because it tears me apart.
I just wish these feeling would leave.
Because it breaking my weakend heart.

To faithum the idea of not haveing her,
Is like thinking of a bullet to the head.
I sometimes think she feels the same way,
but I know its just my mind being missled.

She said the words "I love you"
and my heart started to race.
I started to wonder can this be real?
And i knew it was when she was in my embrace.

Unfortunately I got hit with reality.
I uncoverd her dark world, her dark mask.
So now I sit here in darkness...
And know I am not up for this task.

Love is horrid, Love is bad.
Love is delightful, Love is great.
So now I ask what is love?
It is a portal to your fate.

© Copyright 2001 Dustin Ortiz - All Rights Reserved
Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
1 posted 2001-06-27 12:39 PM


WOW!!  Excellent write my fellow kansan!   This one hit too close to home for me.  It seems you ripped my feelings straight from my darkened heart!

Keep writing,
Mags

Don't fear your tears!

!!!
Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137
VA (U.S.A)
2 posted 2001-06-27 03:00 AM


ill start by saying that this is a nice poem, and it really hits home with people who have suffered heratbreak.

I'm starting to think that just about everyone has had their heart broken at least once in their life, and that maybe, it's how ya come back from it that makes you the person you are. or maybe not, I could be wrong...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-06-28 06:27 AM


Enjoyed your thoughts about love...James
taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

4 posted 2001-06-29 05:02 AM


Exceptional!    Liked the meaning of it.

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

Hellseyes
Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 120
Kansas, USA
5 posted 2001-07-29 12:44 PM


this is da shkit...for real, for shizzle my nizzle, word to your mother.../Drew/
Jessica
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 350
South AL
6 posted 2001-07-29 09:36 PM


Very good...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

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