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Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2001-06-24 01:30 PM


If the day shall come
That you must go
The winds race wild
And the river doesnt flow
Hold me tight
And let me shed my tears
The tornado has come
And resurfaced my fears
Dont look behind
I dont want you to see
The pain and heartache
That has once again found me
Feel no pity
And dont you cry
You felt no love
And I understand why
As the stars disappear
From the darkened sky
Another tear
Shall fall from my eye


Holy!! I come back and no one is left!    Where is everyone at??????

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EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
1 posted 2001-06-26 04:17 AM


Is that you DKW?  if so welcome back! if not, well I still liked this one.  

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
2 posted 2001-06-26 09:33 AM


Yes it is me!    And thanx hon, its great to be back!!!

Mags

Don't fear your tears!

Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
3 posted 2001-06-26 11:23 AM



Hi DK,

You still write as lovely as ever ... As always, I enjoyed this piece.  


~verve

Dark Kisses
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since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas
4 posted 2001-06-26 01:27 PM


Thanx Verve!  Your kind words are greatly respected!

Mags

Don't fear your tears!

baerlon
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 197
Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA
5 posted 2001-06-28 01:30 AM


:-( things have gone really down hill around here. so much so i really don't post anymore.  but i still like to read what is posted, and yours was a great read.
:-)

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

anonymous albert ?
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6 posted 2001-06-28 03:41 AM


wow!...this was great!...i truly enjoyed this piece...seems like you were gone for a while well..wB!...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2001-06-28 06:24 AM


This is nice Dark Kisses...James
taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

8 posted 2001-06-29 05:04 AM


This is a beautiful poignant piece... welcome back.  Take care  

may you live all the days of your life. -- jonathan swift

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