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carolinadreams
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since 2000-07-20
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0 posted 2001-06-01 04:43 PM



she was lost beyond her early days
she came through in yesterdays
she just lost a bit of the past
she went through the [edit] on a mast
she wondered if she'd ever find home
she lost it again within the winds
ya see coming home wasn't quite what it had been
she just lost she figured
so she sat down and began to write
it was a godsend
she finally felt at home
nites turned within her daze
lays turned against her prays
she found cheap lines sewn within the sands of time

but, she just wondered how you could sow, or sew anything without a seed
she pushed the limit always, she canned some feelings
rainy day
she felt it should save itself
along came a poet
she said he would enjoy
she kept straight along her lines
and he dreampt of her... in time
she lived and loved
he listened and loved

within the boundries
without all the sh**
again they died

Dedicated to all who write and feel

J.L. Koehler


Just a reminder about the guidelines and profanity...thanks.

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 06-01-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 J.L. Koehler - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-06-02 09:41 AM


she found cheap lines sewn within the sands of time

I love this line...so much was  edited I  think I got the picture  huggss

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-06-03 09:08 AM


This was a sombre poem, and thoughout it I relapsed into meloncholy. Lol.
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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