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HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-05-23 06:02 PM


Goodbyes are always sad,
But forever they are not.
Even though I'm empty now,
I must cherish what I've got.

God took you away,
To the sweet heavens above.
He the best angel,
To spread the gift of love.

Sometimes I may cry,
Because I miss you so much.
I know your forever with me,
But I want to feel your touch.

One day i will be with you,
And never will we part.
But for now you are in heaven,
And forever in my heart



© Copyright 2001 Ashley - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2001-05-23 07:18 PM


Ashley,
So sad to lose a loved one, it's painful and just doesn't seem fair or right.When I think of a lost loved one I always remember this quote from the telemovie 'True Women' -
"It's not our loved ones that make our lives.
It's the loving them that does.
And distance or death cannont take that away.
We have it in our hearts - forever."
*hugs*
Isis

*Enlightenment is within all things*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
2 posted 2001-05-23 07:24 PM


A beautiful display of love and the coping of loss.  Take care,

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16
Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!
3 posted 2001-06-05 11:28 AM


A Wonderful poem, you cature the feeling of loss so well in the structure and language! Very good poem I loved it! Hope you're OK!

^*~KickingKim~*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

LadyPeach1
Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282

4 posted 2001-06-05 12:42 PM


Heavens angel,
That was a BEAUTIFUL poem!  I really really feel like it related to my poem which I just posted yesterday titled "Forever..."
This poem really related to it, and it was a beautiful poem!  I enjoyed it so much.
LadyPeach1

Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
5 posted 2001-06-05 11:11 PM


Beautiful  
Temptress*Moon


I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2001-06-06 07:48 AM


HeAvEnS AnGeL,
This is so real and well presented as well *HuGS*
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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