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allis4angel
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since 2001-04-10
Posts 82
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0 posted 2001-05-18 05:39 PM


Time became so slowly
Sad and hopeless
Since I burned my own dreams
Choosing to be the hero
Like those lonely guys on movies
Time became so cold
With no hope to be warmed
And no permission to dream
‘Cause heroes
They always do the right thing

Time became so dark
Empty and full of nothing
Since I opened my secrets
Loosing the licence to believe
Wish, need or fight

Time became so lonely
Afraid any word can hurt again
Meanwhile silence
Keeps burning slowly
Where no one can see

Time became so blind
Running away
From what is going on
Hiding behind the true
But with no chance to lie again

Time became so cruel
Slowly, cold, dark, lonely and blind
But heroes don’t cry
They just do what has to be done
All the time


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1 posted 2001-05-23 08:10 PM


~*stands up and applauds*~
This is outstanding!!! Wow!!!
I'm very very impressed
keep it up
thanks for the wonderful read
~*keeps applauding*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

zarina
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since 2001-05-19
Posts 180

2 posted 2001-05-24 06:37 AM


Very good poem! I liked it alot and I enjoyed reading it!  
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