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Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

0 posted 2001-01-17 05:01 PM


            We tried
          To hold onto
         Something, that
        Was Never really
       There. And in the
      End, I was left with
      Broken hearted dispare
        Now. All I want to do
         Is remember the way
            We once were with
               Eachother at night.
                  Lying qietly in the
                     Silver moonlight.
                        When all we
                           Had was
                              Love
                                &
               Happiness
              But now Our
              Love has again
                Come undone.
                  You and me
                     Are now,
                        Just,
                            I


ok so i tried to make one big broken looking heart and that didn't work, so i made two one bigger than the other and they still dont look like broken hearts, but use your imagination



"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

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Temptress*Moon
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 240
Long Island, NY
1 posted 2001-01-17 06:22 PM


Gin...Somehow it seems you seep into my thoughts and feeling when you write*S* Excellent! and i like the formatting too*S*
Temp!



I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH-

Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2001-01-18 08:33 AM


temp thank you so much
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