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Jenn Cirrincione
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0 posted 2001-05-18 04:02 PM


Never seen such true beauty,
As I see in you.
And every night,
I wish to hold you.

All I want,
I cannot have.
This plea of mine,
Only impossibility.

And though content am I,
To even know you,
The distance between us,
Pulls tears from my eye.

All of this,
So unfair.
What I need,
So far from reach.


"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 05-18-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-18 04:12 PM


ups!
Very, very nice.
It's so simple, isn't it?
Thanks for sharing

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2 posted 2001-05-21 12:16 PM


jenn...the title just caught my attention *snaps fingers*<~~~like that...hehe but yea...this was to be and was a interetsing read...i liked it and hope to see more...cya~

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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3 posted 2001-05-21 02:08 AM


simplistic put. I enjoyed this stanza.
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All of this,
So unfair.
What I need,
So far from reach.
******************

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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4 posted 2001-05-21 07:32 AM


Thank you guys! I'm really glad you liked this!  

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

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