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G. A. Webb
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0 posted 2001-05-17 08:00 PM


My body aches to be near you
My flesh it yearns for your touch
My ears they burn just to hear you
My love I miss you so much

My life is nothing without you
Of  that I'm quite aware
My love I'll never doubt you
If only I were there

My soul it longs to be with you
My heart it screams to be free
Tell me what more I can possibly do
To once again have you with me

My days are filled with sadness
And that my dear is true
How can I stop the madness
For all I want is you

Please make your way back to me
And all my quirks and charms
Only my love is what you'll see
When you fall into my arms

G. A. WEBB

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


© Copyright 2001 G. A. Webb - All Rights Reserved
NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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1 posted 2001-05-17 10:34 PM


very nice...... i'd like to read more of your work, so off to the search engine  
-napalm


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allis4angel
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2 posted 2001-05-18 04:17 PM


I found it very beautiful.
Congratulations.

qtpieelmo
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3 posted 2001-05-18 09:32 PM


AWE that was wonderful & i know excactly how ya feel--my bf lives 4 hours away & he hung up on me last sat. & i haven't heard from him since--so i hope you get your love back   LOVE ELMO <3
a-alibaster
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4 posted 2001-05-20 11:04 AM


Lovely , heartfelt, and honost words, indeed...
Until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

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I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

poni
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5 posted 2001-05-21 01:47 AM


longing well penned!  smiles
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6 posted 2001-05-21 07:34 AM


Great write! Oh my gosh do I know this feeling well. *sigh*
Keep em coming.

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

G. A. Webb
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7 posted 2001-05-23 07:38 PM


Thank you all so much. I'm glad you liked this one. Unfortunatly the person I had in mind when I wrote this lives 8 times zones away in jolly old England (yes Lynn, you were right). The odds of me ever seeing her again are slim and none. So I'll just chalk this one (like so many other "love" poems I've written) up as wishful thinking.

Anyways, thank you all again and take care.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


Captivating1
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8 posted 2001-06-07 04:24 PM


How did you know what I was going through?:-) Please keep 'em comin'...
LadyPeach1
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9 posted 2001-06-07 07:34 PM


Such a beautiful poem!!  I liked it alot.
LadyPeach1

G. A. Webb
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10 posted 2001-06-11 03:33 PM


Captivating1: I don't know, just psycic I guess...lol! I'm glad you liked it. Good luck and take care!

LadyPeach1: And I thank you as well. I'm glad you liked it too.

G

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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