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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
Love lost Lost love pain hurtsthe hurt is pain I miss you I want you Back don't you care? did u ever? guess not Love lost lost love will you be there will you care If i call on you willyou hold me while I cry I hope so you will never know how much I care for u not quite love a little more than like I wish u understood do you? guess not |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I have often wonder just how much they understand this loss love we have had. the ones that left. I understand this poem from my point of view and it is true. Keep going. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You have a simple, but straight to the point style of writing. This is simply beautiful I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And usually they don't...they are in their own little world...looking for their happiness..sometimes already thinking of someone else...our happiness may be the last thing on their mind...James |
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