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Dark Poetry #3

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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-11 01:15 AM

In this world-
I finally arrive,
Leaving the rest behind,

My birth signified-
No beginning,
Just another chapter-
In my book of life,

For nine months-
I studied the ways,
Now I apply them,

I learn nothing-
Until I move on,
Death comes,
Meeting my silent call.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 2001-05-11 07:05 AM

Nicely done Xeonox...very dark indeed...

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

2 posted 2001-05-11 08:42 PM

This was short and good i liked it great work!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-14 01:25 AM

great job..i liked it short and nice...thanks for the read...E

orcist:...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

4 posted 2001-05-14 11:22 PM

thanks severn, ginners and especially albert for your comments.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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