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I Came Here Alone
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I Came Here Alone |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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I Came Here Alone I came here alone by no one’s choice it turns out someone was wanted until I showed up Oops, wrong kind, can’t you send it back? A lifetime of hate was born that day a dream was dashed a fine crystal shattered the shards of which I’ve walked on for half a century and more Krawdad 05.09.01 |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This poem reminds me of someone I know who was the surviving twin in a difficult birth and always felt that the 'wrong' twin had been born. Intensely written! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yet no longer to walk alone through glass or fire.....helen "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Kraw, This is intense, short, and telling. I loved it, you've done an excellent job with few words. My kinda style. Thanks. Billy  "The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
JLR no twin, but stay tuned, you are on the right track. 1slick_lady thanks, it's been a lonely walk. coyote appreciate your comments . . . thanks Krawdad |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
wow, this was a great poem and it reminds me of the way i often feel |
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