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I Am The God.
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I Am The God. |
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gremlin Junior Member
since 2001-04-18
Posts 25NY, USA |
I Am The God. You've lived in a lie, You're out of time. The memories sing fresh As you are about to die. Christ wounders around the room, So is the death hides with the moon. Have little patience The end is so soon. Your God is a sinner with a broken plan. His weakness and lies reflects in the man. He said he will save you, the question is when. When the dark night will be filled with the sun. When kids will have fun playing with a gun. When all the waters will be filled with your blood. When dirt and the mud will be flushed with the flood. Then you will say, "I Am The God." 04/29/01 Peace and love to you all. Stan. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
my favorite stanza is Your God is a sinner with a broken plan. His weakness and lies reflects in the man. He said he will save you, the question is when. interesting topic. Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This was IMPRESSIVE. Such surrealistic imagery! I liked the general darkness in it. It was very stimulating to the imagination. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
It was the last stanza that held it all for me. The entire piece though is great, whole and biting at the edges with gloom, which makes it for a good read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. |
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